As part of a story driven series I don't feel that this movie was anywhere near long enough to serve as an intro for an episodic frash. As it stands I as the viewer am left puzzled as to why Radcliffe has opened fire on this car... I wonder if the windows weren't tinted and say an old grandmother was driving this car would he open fire just as quickly? He's a bad cunt right....? Man old granny ain't gonna stand a chance! On a serious note however the damage done to your movie by cutting it off into a "to be continued" state mid battle is inexcuseable and if you weren't in such a rush to publish this flick this episode may have been sowed up as it should have been and in so doing enhancing the experience 2-3 fold. But when looked at from an animation perspective I can easily see why you wanted to rush this out and show off your talent because there is alot to show! Also attempting to perform a 3D effect using 2D tools is always tricky but you pulled it off well with everything looking rather smooth and slick. The pace of the movie is also appreciated and despite being disappointingly short its still very good. So if this is nothing other than you demonstrating your frash skills you have done so admireably and for what there is the directing and story telling is rather good but still tarnished by the cliff hanger in the side of this potential classic. As part of a story driven series I don't feel that this movie was anywhere near long enough to serve as an intro for an episodic frash. As it stands I as the viewer am left puzzled as to why Radcliffe has opened fire on this car... I wonder if the windows weren't tinted and say an old grandmother was driving this car would he open fire just as quickly? He's a bad cunt right....? Man old granny ain't gonna stand a chance! On a serious note however the damage done to your movie by cutting it off into a "to be continued" state mid battle is inexcuseable and if you weren't in such a rush to publish this flick this episode may have been sowed up as it should have been and in so doing enhancing the experience 2-3 fold. But when looked at from an animation perspective I can easily see why you wanted to rush this out and show off your talent because there is alot to show! Also attempting to perform a 3D effect using 2D tools is always tricky but you pulled it off well with everything looking rather smooth and slick. The pace of the movie is also appreciated and despite being disappointingly short its still very good. So if this is nothing other than you demonstrating your frash skills you have done so admireably and for what there is the directing and story telling is rather good but still tarnished by the cliff hanger in the side of this potential classic.

Wow, Nice john woo like visuals. Very good film all round. Wow, Nice john woo like visuals. Very good film all round.

[color=#ffd700]Yeah, basically, Bazuka summed it up, maybe when you make the second part, you should merge this, and the next one together, so it would be longer[/color] [color=#ffd700]Yeah, basically, Bazuka summed it up, maybe when you make the second part, you should merge this, and the next one together, so it would be longer[/color]

This was a fine fine display of animating. Needless to say the voice acting and graphics were terrible. Well maybe i'm being a little harsh on the graphics, but they seriously need to be neater, and you need to understand when it's a good time to use gradients. In terms of animating you are very talented, and it's obvious your drawing ability is holding you back. I know this is weak but i'd love to see a sprite movie from you. Because with set graphics and your ability to animate it could look great. However, if you improve the graphics and maybe have a more original story, i'm sure we will be hearing a lot more about you. A deserved 8/10 This was a fine fine display of animating. Needless to say the voice acting and graphics were terrible. Well maybe i'm being a little harsh on the graphics, but they seriously need to be neater, and you need to understand when it's a good time to use gradients. In terms of animating you are very talented, and it's obvious your drawing ability is holding you back. I know this is weak but i'd love to see a sprite movie from you. Because with set graphics and your ability to animate it could look great. However, if you improve the graphics and maybe have a more original story, i'm sure we will be hearing a lot more about you. A deserved 8/10